Life Unrefined Ep. 5: WAR

They say all is fair in love and war. And Zack would soon find that war is what he loved. His animosity was at it's peak and his thirst for blood was not yet satiated by the few men that he had shot less than an hour earlier. They rode in the car, no music, no talking, just focusing on the task at hand. This crooked Lawyer had to be dealt with. They needed info and whereabouts. Zack could only picture killing the lawyer with his bare hands. His hands trembled from the adrenaline rushing through his veins. He was in a different world than the one we all have grown to know. He was in a world that was tainted by darkness and blood. At this point his life was not a factor. He cared not whether he lived or died. He only cared about getting his point across. And he would make his point very clear.

The guns he toted opened his soul to be damned

but not before that damned Lawyer

he wasn't a fan of snacks and candy

so he refused to have a chip on his shoulder

he felt older than his age

oh the responsibility of power

but he could no longer be that 14 yr old boy

he had become a damn man that hour

he looked down at all the blood

his hands, his clothes, and all on the cars' seats

and in that moment he felt the suffering

and pity of defeat

defeat was not an option

victory was his only choice

he would be more than the Kidd with heart

he'd speak with more than just his voice


He sat and plotted angles and strategies. There were many ways to approach the upcoming battle all in which he plotted and planned to work out in his favor. But the idea he liked the most was getting his few friends together and forming an organization. And this successful hit could be their entrance. He had seen it already in Tee, the eagerness to prove his worth. That was exactly what he needed from now on and that would be what he would create. He had to get on it right away. "You got guns?" Zack asked. "Yea. I got plenty." Terrell replied. They were pulling up to Zack's house. "Go in and get cleaned up. I'll pick you up in about an hour," Terrell said. Zack opened the door and got out quietly, still pondering his approach for the night. As he got to the door he prepared to face the girls. He knew he owed them an explanation for what had happened earlier. But the deep breaths he took neither brought the right words nor the right feeling within his body. He decided to just go in. As he opened the door Amy was standing there pacing the room anxiously. When she laid eyes upon him her heart sank.

"Oh my God!! I thought something else may have happened. Are you okay? Geeze!!! You need to get out of all these bloody clothes. Did you get hurt?" Amy was rambling on and on. She had asked so many questions at one time that Zack barely had enough time to answer any. She continued talking as she led him into the bathroom. "I put the girls to sleep. You need to take a long shower and get yourself cleaned up. I'm gonna stay here with you tonight if you don't mind. I don't think you need to be alone." He walked into the bathroom simply agreeing to everything she was saying. His mind was too focused on the blood he craved to pay too much attention to her at the moment. She closed the door to the bathroom and stood outside. Her head hung down because she could feel his pain. She rubbed the door. She wished it was him she was rubbing. He needed comfort in this troubling time.

On the other side of that door Zack was taking his clothes off and turning on the shower water. He was finally alone and the pressure built up from the last few weeks was finally about to burst. He stepped into the shower slowly as the water hit his skin. He began to think again of the transgression against what was now his family and began to get mad again. All of his emotions were in a state of total disarray. He held his head down as water ran down his face. The warm water mixed with blood draining off of him seemed to remind him of the blood gushing from Simeon's body. He began to cry. Tears left his eyes by the thousands. He wanted so bad to be strong, but he had no more strength left in that moment. From within his tears a rage overtook him within that instant. He screamed loudly as he punched the tiled wall of the shower. He had punched so hard that a few tiles had broken up and fallen on to the shower floor. He bent down to pick up the pieces. He fumbled the broken pieces around in his hand admiring the fact that he had enough power to do that.

He leaned out of the shower to throw the pieces of the wall away, reaching for the small garbage can his mom had always kept in the bathroom. As he leaned he felt a small soft hand grab hold of his. He pulled the curtain back to see Amy standing there. He covered himself up instantly. "Are you okay?" Amy asked.

He was surprised to see that she had come in. "Yeah. I'm okay," he replied. She started rubbing up the arm she had grabbed. Zack dropped the pieces of tile nervously. Behind the curtain his member was seething with excitement. She pulled the curtain back and looked at his body. She let go of his hand and began to undress herself slowly. He watched her admirably. Her body was such an amazing sight. She was fit from years of Cheerleading. He had no idea what to do as she finally took her panties off.

His mouth hung wide open as he gazed upon this spectacle of a woman. She was older than he was and obviously had done this before, but Zack, well Zack was a newbie. She grabbed his right hand and laid it upon her breast. He felt a sigh of relief within him. They felt so soft and round and it was just amazing. She stepped closer and pushed him toward the back of the shower. He moved back without so much as a second thought as their lips met softly. Their tongues intertwined in what seemed to be pure bliss and Zack completely forgot about the events of the day.

She kissed his lips slowly

little nibbles here and there

he placed his hands on both her cheeks

and now wet and silky hair

she pulled him ever closer

he did not deny her touch

he could feel his penis throbbing

and this was just his luck

he had gotten his dream girl

and now she was making his dreams come true

losing his virginity to her at that moment

was more than he thought he could do

she was rubbing all over his body

in return he rubbed on hers

careful not to do too much

so the moment he wouldn't disturb

she reached for his hands and grabbed them

and put them on her ass

then said "U betta act like u want me"

and gave him a little laugh

she had just given him the okay

and okay it was time to go

and he was so excited that he

could barely wait no mo'

they were about the same height

and he had watched a couple of nude flicks

he lifted her leg to the side of the shower

and she said "u ready to do it?"

he was as ready as he'd ever be

her body was shaped like a melody

she reached down and wiggled him around

and that feeling to her was heavenly

he grabbed her breast all anxious and stuff

she looked down to guide his d***

he was so nervous, touchin' her curves and

she tried inserting him into her split

she was tight

he was scared

she shoved him slowly inside

she grabbed his hips and pushed and pulled

he had never felt more alive

"When you come, don't come in me"

she told him, but he'd never came before

"oohhh shit. How will I know?"

he said as they slid to the floor

the water rushed over their entangled bodies

the sounds they made, a bit unpleasant

young and dumb and full of come

he could only last a few more seconds

she was enjoying herself

he liked it even more

shhhhit, ooooo shiiit, fuck

then came a knock at the front door

They both jumped up hurriedly trying to figure out who the hell was at the door. Then the knock came again as Amy threw her clothes back on. She ran out of the bathroom saying, "I'll get the door. You go get dressed." He hopped up and ran out of the bathroom naked to where he kept his clothes in the hallway. He had hoped that the knocks at the door would not awaken the girls who were asleep in the room. He threw on the first thing he could find. As he looked down the hall he saw Terrell standing at the door. He walked down the hall. He knew what time it was...

As he approached the front door Amy had an inquiring look. Zack looked back towards Terrell as he got to the door and noticed that there were at least 20 or 30 guys in his yard. He looked at Amy and said, "I gotta do what I gotta do," un-remorsefully. She looked as though she'd never see him again as he walked out. Everyone got in cars and they drove to an abandoned warehouse. Once inside Terrell posed a very serious question...

"So what you wanna do?"


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